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Night falls and there she sits
Alone again watching the rain plink on to her window
Alone in her mind with only her thoughts for company
You’ll never find love, you’re entirely too shy
But she’s getting braver
More and more each day
She actually looked that attendant in the eye
And she shook that man’s hand at the museum
Maybe those demons are wrong

She pulls on her sweater
It’s chilly outside and he does the same
Neither lost dreamer is paying attention
And there’s a collision
He flounders
She smiles
Both choking on words that they cannot say
And that’s how it started
Just one winter day

A million years later that smile still stays
Today is her day
She feels like a princess
All dressed up in that dress with the puffy sleeves
The kind that Cinderella had when she went to her ball
And now it’s her in the starlight
He brings the corsage and the cheesiest grin
Tonight is their night
And tomorrow again
©2007-2009 ~nmbc-lvr
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Written for a photo colaboration in English class


happiness of a new relationship, a prom for a once lonely girl. And something more ahead.

But there's more as I'm sure you will find - enjoy!

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:iconcobaine:
Aww it's adorable. There's a typo in the third to last line. "He bring the corsage and the cheesiest grin" it's supposed to be "brings" right?

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i'll sell your memories for fifteen pounds per year but you can keep the bad days.
:iconnmbc-lvr:
indeed it is lol
and thank you 1 for catching that and 2 in general

the first part is based off of one of your photos ;p

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~Verbinden Sie mich in der Hölle.~
:iconcobaine:
AHA! I knew it was about me, or something similar...I just thought I was being egotistical haha. I guess that it's inspired by "love like winter." cause you really liked that one. but i could be wrong...which one which one??? I'm all curious!

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i'll sell your memories for fifteen pounds per year but you can keep the bad days.
:iconnmbc-lvr:
lol no it wasn't egotistical at all. What we had to do was make a poem based off of three pictures. The first stanza is based off of you the second by a picture of cory and I holding hands and the third my friend with her date at her prom

and you've deleted in but the title was something to the effect of Say Hello
I know I'm missing part of it but you're looking upwards straight in to the camera

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~Verbinden Sie mich in der Hölle.~
:iconcobaine:
Oh that's awesome.

"say hello to the angels" it's in my scraps :)

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i'll sell your memories for fifteen pounds per year but you can keep the bad days.
:iconnmbc-lvr:
yes! that one!
but yeah, b/c you were looking straight in to the camera and that's something you don't often do it gived me inspiration

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~Verbinden Sie mich in der Hölle.~
:iconcobaine:
oooh. yeah, I don't do that often. I'm glad it gave you inspiration dear :hug:

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i'll sell your memories for fifteen pounds per year but you can keep the bad days.
:iconnmbc-lvr:
yes, which is why I picked it haha
me too :hug: ((b/c it'll probablty get me an A ;p but really - it made me write a pretty good piece hehe and it's just an all around good feeling))


oh oh oh oh guess what!

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~Verbinden Sie mich in der Hölle.~
:iconcobaine:
haha sorry this is so late. I'm going through all my commetns >.<

What grade did you end up getting?

WHAT?!

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do you believe in rock and roll? can music save your mortal soul?

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